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I’m a naturally optimistic type of person you know Yeah I think good things will happen only they usually don’t Take Noel even though he’s educated and rich and he don’t think he’s even gay I want to belong to him I want him to take me completely Dane ConnellyDane Connelly is a gay janitor and boxer with a soft heart and a simple outlook he wants to meet the. AN UNLIKELY PARTNERSHIPI enjoyed this book so much that I find myself going every few days to bask in pure love of the main menDane is a boxer scarred and considered not very smart because of the way he looks and talks His appearance says strong and tough but never was there a man gentle and fragile He is a just a poor man searching for someone to love and to have someone love him in return working as a janitor at a local university he meets the man he is destined to love but Noel is way out of his league A rich and smart man he could never grow to love a boxer as scarred and unintelligent as he isNoel has no idea whether he is gay or straight having no sexual experience since an accident left him disabled with a busted leg Any form of sexual excitement leaves his leg hurting and his ego small He cant help but being drawn to the beautiful Dane his innocence and his pure heartbut how can one so beautiful be attracted to a crippleThis story is just so sweet and I love the role reversal makes for an interesting love scene Theres something sexy when a strong and masculine character becomes submissive to his less masculine partner This story is about innocence and prejudices that people tend to have for someone who doesn t uite fit the mold Dane and Noel will have a lot to overcome but the way they love each other is just so sweet This will show you that not always do you need to be book smart or rich to come out on top

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Fire alarm in the library and lights a cigarette Noel is drawn from his shell Soon Noel needs to touch Dane exploring his sexuality for the first time And both learn that looks can be deceivingHowever Noel's controlling father is appalled by the relationship and uietly arranges to get Dane out of the way and punish him for daring to love a man so far above his station. All Dane Connelly wants is to be a great boxer and find the love of his life It seems he finally got an answer to one of his prayers the day he met Noel Atherton at the University library where Dane works as a janitor The attraction was instantaneous and beneficial for the two because Dane brings out the protective side of Noel while Noel answer s Dane s unspoken need of being valued Problem is Noel s father doesn t approve of their relationship and will stop at nothing to keep them apartI think the strongest aspect of the story is with Dane s characterization Described as having a body like Superman and eyes like Bambi I couldn t help but fall in love with is child like optimism and positive outlook in life He is good natured almost to the point of being naive so it s heartbreaking to read when he gets taken advantage of by other people Good thing Noel s there to make sure he s well taken care ofIf only the kinks and sex toys were taken out of the story line this book could ve earned another star from me Good thing Dane s adorable best friend Goldie almost made up for that little pet peeve Almost

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Right man someone who will look past his macho sport and put him in the place of a submissive He wants to fall in love and belong to his partnerOn the surface Noel Atherton an intellectual shy and sexually repressed university graduate student with a crippled leg could not be the dominant lover that Dane longs for But after their first meeting when Dane disables the. At first glance it would be rather easy to pass this off as a bad book Without a doubt The Janitor is not a stellar piece of uality fiction However the plot and characters ideas are intriguing and could have been crafted in such a way to deliver a complex and emotional journey as these two men find love Yet the author commits several glaring and amateurish mistakes which turn this novel from something with potential to an exaggerated stereotype filled with homophobic dialogue and one dimensional characters Seeing as this is the debut novel for the author one hopes future novels will grow from these mistakes into a fully realized and developed plot with complicated and involved characters None of which was present here but lurking under the bad writing is a hint of possible potentialThe plot revolves around Dane the actual janitor who befriends Noah and the two embark on a pseudo BDSM sexual relationship complete with role playing fantasy fulfillment and the evil controlling father with money than God manipulating it all The exaggerated tropes and obvious plot devices did the story no favors and created a predictable course of action down to the final resolution which was incredibly unbelievable and unrealistic even considering the outrageous artificial world the author created The story attempted to infuse emotion in its prose but failed due to poor writing inconsistent pacing and empty stereotypical charactersThe third person POV writing was a big mistake The writing was third person alternating between Noel and Dane s perspective yet written with such prose and phrasing as if the story was first person point of view from Dane therefore creating a low level of uality writing While this could be acceptable if the story had actually been written from Dane s POV but the choice to use third person simply resulted in a badly written piece of fiction that jars the pace and flow of the story From word choice and phrasing to exaggerated emphasis the story reads from Dane s perspective as an uneducated simple yet sensitive man This could have been handled many different ways instead of giving the impression the author is a poor writerThe characters are often flat and stereotypical using a variety of almost insulting themes for gay men and clearly a woman s idea of gay men and relationships While this wouldn t even be cause for mentioning but the over use of slang and gay tropes is glaring From the use of the word date for any sex Dane has to the comment from a random hookup about not wanting to hear talking during sex or he wouldn t be gay these glaring stereotypes are distracting For example Who you talkin to ueer boy his trainer asked him Someone very nice who I hope to impress I m just tryin to memorize some things you know I thought you boys just fucked each other s asses What s there to talk about None of this is helped by the author s portrayal of Dane He s supposed to be a sweet sensitive big hearted man who s not dumb but just uneducated Yet throughout the book Dane constantly tells himself and others how stupid he is and rarely if ever is he contradicted Even his friends make excuses for his mental inadeuacies to the point that it is surprising Dane can function at all His sweet and trusting nature is shown time and time again as is his misguided notions about love trust pride and being a man Dane claims he likes to be told what to do and this is clear as his decision making processes and ability to understand even the most simplistic concepts seems to elude him Whether Dane truly enjoyed being dominated sexually or just knew he needed someone to help him survive the various pitfalls of life is debatable The character is somewhat likeable but pitiable as the author repeatedly makes him stupid than believableWhich brings up Noel Dane s sexual dominant and a man in need of serious therapy Noel is a sheltered cripple living with the typical overbearing and evil father Noel can t seem to stand up to his father and going so far as to belittle Dane repeatedly both in front of Noel s father and even in later arguments referring to Dane as stupid and a moron This kind of abusive relationship they have in no way supports a healthy BDSM relationship not to mention the creepy way Noel calls himself Daddy considering the numerous father issues he has Noel claims to own Dane early on in the story yet fails Dane repeatedly throughout the book with no conseuences since Dane forgives Noel easily and without much thought This uneven and ultimately unhealthy relationship supposedly ends happily with Noel in some much needed therapyThere are additional characters such as the overbearing evil father who has money and power to manipulate everything from Dane s job to his apartment with the reuisite and predictable physical violence The man is of course in the closet about his own sexuality and has anger management problems going so far as to urinate on his son s bed at one point Because of course a rich successful doctor who is a cardboard cut out for evil would do something like that The father as well has a totally unbelievable and melodramatic ending which actually fits in well with the over the top and overdone ridiculous final fight scene Why call the police on a potential murderer when you can instead agree to a boxing match and prove your manliness This plot twist made absolutely no sense and just capped off a poorly written storyFrom beginning to the end the author uses the easiest and most obvious choices instead of imbuing subtly complexity and interest into her story The attempt to make the reader emotionally connect with Dane fell flat because while he certainly is portrayed as an innocent sweet man he is also close to being completely helpless with his lack of mental ability Thus it is painful to watch the repeated betrayals he s subjected to on every level Add in the poor phrasing with homophobic overtures and unrealistic behaviors littering the pages and this is an unfortunate failure For those readers of the mm genre that prefer their romance well written well crafted with three dimensional characters pass this one by I was lured by the gorgeous cover and should have read the excerpt


10 thoughts on “The Janitor

  1. says:

    For a while there I thought I was going to die of compassionNow? I'm pretty sure I've been trolledThis story is an incredible number of good an

  2. says:

    AN UNLIKELY PARTNERSHIPI enjoyed this book so much that I find myself going every few days to bask in pure love of the main menDane is a boxer scarred and considered not very smart because of the way he looks and talks His appearance says strong and tough but never was there a man gentle and fragile He is a just a poor man search

  3. says:

    When I first began reading this I found Dane’s voice to be so endearing that my hopes were rather high that this would be a great read but it just kept disappointing meDane’s looking for the right man who will look past his brawn and “take care of him” He wants love and a real relationship not just a series of anonymous romps in back alleys He thinks he’s found his perfect man in Noel People often take advan

  4. says:

    At first glance it would be rather easy to pass this off as a bad book Without a doubt The Janitor is not a stellar piece of uality

  5. says:

    What a great read I really did love this book for a number of reasons Dane Connelly is without doubt one of the sweetest most innocent characters I've encountered in a long time and Noel Atherton was interesting and the perfect man for him They needed each other and they found each other which was lovely The supporting characters were terrific too Mr Trent Gilbert Charlie and the various boxers at the gym On the other ha

  6. says:

    Dane put his hands on his jeans and then hesitated “If I take off my pants for you it means I love you a little

  7. says:

    From the cover I went in expecting a boxer type who was kinda blue collar and rough around the edges Yeah and maybe a little dirty heh I can see what the author was trying to accomplish but there is a difference between a character who is a little dim to someone who needs a caregiver The elements needed to make good Ds pairing were not apparent the plot reuired a great deal of suspention of disbelief and I’m afraid I found this a difficul

  8. says:

    I was very impressed with this story And while it contained enough sad moments to not re read it any time soon it was also beautiful heart wre

  9. says:

    All Dane Connelly wants is to be a great boxer and find the love of his life It seems he finally got an answer to one of his prayers the day he met Noel Atherton at the University library where Dane works as a janitor The attraction was instantaneous and beneficial for the two because Dane brings out the protective side of Noel while Noel ans

  10. says:

    I found Dane a sweet and innocent character despite his mental limitations Noel was a perfect match for him with his intelligence and determination to help Dane achieve what his goals are Very likeable heros with a sexy and sweet plot I loved it

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