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Luke to the high seas where he and his crew have to fight for their lives as they Luke Banderloft PDF try to outrun the pirate lord that is hunting them down Now desperate. Very poorly written Clich after clich wooden character after wooden character Bogged down in nonsensical convoluted prose Reading it is worse than getting your teeth extracted with pliers without the use of a pain killer It s telling that the 5 star reviews are all from America one of which is the author himself Friends and family Who knows Don t waste your money

Review î E-book, or Kindle E-pub Ô Rocky Perry

Luke Banderloft and The McFarven Pirates

This is the story of a down and The PDFEPUB #187 on his luck wayfarer Luke a silver skinned winged elf whose life turns around after finding a true friend Adventure leads. Sampled No sale There is possibly a good story in hereSadly I shall never know The sample available from for Kindle offered a pretty large chunk of text However it an unschooled unruly jumbling of words that builds up to for me an insurmountable pileIf self confidence and enthusiasm guaranteed success then Mr Perry would be world class With some help from stricter editors and sterner friends then he may well achieve mediocrityIf you don t have children and always wondered what they might write as their first story try this book It s that bad Edit I previously wished Mr Perry good luck I now just wish he woul

Rocky Perry Ô 9 Free download

To find his missing friends Luke takes command of a mighty vessel and battles his way through brigands trolls and pirates to find his comrades but who can he really trust. There is a storyteller at work here and he throws out an amazing cast of characters elves several kinds Canarians bigger than most humans Bloods even bigger guys centaurs big and strong but not too smart healers mages Sea Dwarves Bird People trolls Ettin bigger and meaner than trolls and ogres a creature than can move through wood even a minotaur who alas only has a walk on part They all inhabit a world of piracy and skullduggery Some might say there is too much telling by the storyteller and not enough showingThere is much activity too close combat sneak attacks massed attacks betrayals lessons in sword play


6 thoughts on “Luke Banderloft and The McFarven Pirates

  1. says:

    Sampled No sale There is possibly a good story in hereSadly I shall never know The sample available from for Kindle offered a pretty large chunk of text However it an unschooled unruly jumbling of words that builds up to for me an insurmountable pileIf self confidence and enthusiasm guaranteed success then Mr Perry would be world

  2. says:

    Very poorly written Cliché after cliché wooden character after wooden character Bogged down in nonsensical convoluted prose Reading it is worse than getting your teeth extracted with pliers without the use of a pain killer It's tel

  3. says:

    There is a storyteller at work here and he throws out an amazing cast of characters elves several kinds Canarians bigger than most humans Bloods even bigger guys centaurs big and strong but not too smart healers mages Sea Dwarves Bird People trolls Ettin bigger and meaner than trolls and ogres a creature than can

  4. says:

    I gave it 4 because I found myself smiling from head to toe being satisfied with a good book It was simple in its plot but simple meant as eg how I enjoy Monty Python's sketches Its not the deep and epic journey maybe epic

  5. says:

    I wanted to like this book I really did It has potential but sadly that potential is not realized 1 In the world of writers this story is almost all tell and very little show In other words the author tells us Luke was afraid instead of showing us the situation and Luke's reaction and letting us figure out that he is afraid All of the telling makes for rather boring reading 2 Characters do weird inexplicable things For example

  6. says:

    Great book I just added it to get it in the database I wrote it I would love feedback from my fans Thanks